Score: 5

"almost there"

submission: Savage Huskies

date: November 24, 2009

The first 30sec was good, when i was choosing charcters... looking at the art...
but when i started playing the game... oh boy....

pros
-Artwork, concept is solid (for the robots
-Custom music is nice too

cons
-3 of the men who suppose to be piloting the robot look very identical
-the punching looks really... silly...

-i was expecting to be able to use the gun a lot more....
i mean... a robot game where all you do is punch? i didnt expect that...
if you meant for a punching game, a street fight theme would be more appropriate...

-animation can be improved...
yes your concept is good, but you're using one block each for the limbs and thus makes for very limited form of action. of course it would be less obvious if there wasnt punching and more shooting...

-lastly the controls... the running is slow as hell, usually in these kind of sidescrolling fighting 2 taps of -> (-> + ->) would make the charcter dash, which is a little disapointing that it doesnt have....

Score: 6

"wasnt expecting this"

submission: The Bible

date: September 5, 2009

sorry for being a raging atheist, but i was expecting this to be one of those flashes that poked fun at christianity.

but whatever the case, it was okay...
you chose quite a touchy subject to do a flash on, and some of your audience may rate according to their stand on the subject.
thus.. an unfair rating.

your art needs a little work, to say the least.
you seem to avoid drawing faces and fingers whenever possible.
colour choices are a little... poor in some scenes. like when moses splits the red sea... it looked as if he was splitting ice, not water.
quite a bit of stock animation being used. like you only drew jesus i think, once, and kept using it from the loading screen, to when he was on the cross, to when he acended to heaven.

in my opinion, to a christian such as yourself, i believe that you should have put in a little more effort into the flash?
but who am i to judge...

i wont say the music is great, (because that'd be insulting as its the only thing not done by you)
but it did fit your flash pretty well i must say.
an interesting piece, but i'd avoid such topics when it comes to making flash if i were you...

(i can see a fellow atheist few posts below me also rated fairly.)
cant say the same for those who thumbed him down as "useless review"

Score: 6

"some flaws"

submission: Revenge of the Stick

date: September 4, 2009

would help to have a hotkey for towers so its easier to maze

when you pause the game, upgrades continue. try to fix that